HELLO PEOPLE THIS IS MY PAGE I'm 11 years old, i have a Mum, Dad and 2 sisters. I have a cat called Tiger (because she is one) and about 45 fish. T
SIZZLING START On a cold and frosty morning, when the fog was thicker than thick and the water was rising, a little rowing boat came to the wide open shore. There appeared to be two objects on board, obscured by the darkness of the morning. One appeared to be lifeless; the other swayed with the gentle movement of the boat. What lay at my feet, I still remember to this very day - two frozen children, screaming and yelling. It was hell............
CHARACTERIZATION As I walked into the dark room, I saw a big feller, whose eyes glared at me, as if he had nothing else to do. His beard was full of crumbs and his arms as big as logs. His belly buldged over his belt and continued down to the floor!! He was covered in tattoos from his head to his toes, covering every little bit of skin I could see. His big black scruffy work boots had hot pink laces and his faded denim jeans had lime green stitching. Sewn on to his custom made work jumper was a name I will never forget.........................................Freddy Billy Frankenstein the 1st !!!!!
I'm 11 years old, i have a Mum, Dad and 2 sisters. I have a cat called Tiger (because she is one) and about 45 fish.
T
SIZZLING START
On a cold and frosty morning, when the fog was thicker than thick and the water was rising, a little rowing boat came to the wide open shore. There appeared to be two objects on board, obscured by the darkness of the morning. One appeared to be lifeless; the other swayed with the gentle movement of the boat. What lay at my feet, I still remember to this very day - two frozen children, screaming and yelling. It was hell............
CHARACTERIZATION
As I walked into the dark room, I saw a big feller, whose eyes glared at me, as if he had nothing else to do. His beard was full of crumbs and his arms as big as logs. His belly buldged over his belt and continued down to the floor!! He was covered in tattoos from his head to his toes, covering every little bit of skin I could see. His big black scruffy work boots had hot pink laces and his faded denim jeans had lime green stitching. Sewn on to his custom made work jumper was a name I will never forget.........................................Freddy Billy Frankenstein the 1st !!!!!
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